Since last Monday, we have been working on Pick A Path stories in Mrs Jones' writing group. Mine was about a Diamond Heist, and trust me, it's pretty dang crazy...! Do you want to play it? Hope so! Here it is, hope you enjoy :D
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, June 12, 2020
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I noticed there were a few bugs with the linking, but i fixed it fr yall xD
ReplyDeleteHello Harry! I like how you thought it was a video game :D -umm yes I got inspired by Stealing the Diamond (one of the funniest games EVER in my opinion) and Markiplier´s Diamond Heist. We were only allowed to do as much as I did sadly, but a sequel is on the list! Thanks for commenting!
ReplyDeleteHi Alex! Once again, thanks for commenting on my blog. I have read Loot before, and I guess it is similar. You can see when I replied to Harry (or maybe you cant, because I am writing this now) that I explained we were only allowed to write as much as I did. R.I.P. But I might be making a sequel soon, so keep your eyes peeled!
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